Hi Zamri. The section is looking much clearer... some suggestions: • The inhabitation needs to be more descriptive of the effects you desribe- exposure/ perception (ground floor starts to work though!) • Walkers Court elevation needs to be modelled- the perspective is wrong at present- also we need to see glimpses beyond (just blocks) • The flank wall to the left is not straight
Camouflage is the blog for Intermediate Unit 6 at the Architectural Association School of Architecture, taught by Jonathan Dawes, Dagobert Bergmans and Fumiko Kato
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Hi Zamri. The section is looking much clearer... some suggestions:
• The inhabitation needs to be more descriptive of the effects you desribe- exposure/ perception (ground floor starts to work though!)
• Walkers Court elevation needs to be modelled- the perspective is wrong at present- also we need to see glimpses beyond (just blocks)
• The flank wall to the left is not straight
Keep going! Best J
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