tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1907085865150177790.post1140758885197795301..comments2023-06-11T13:47:24.014+01:00Comments on Camouflage: Sectional Perspective Through Walkers CourtJonathan Daweshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13887093576523816219noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1907085865150177790.post-88113685793571163552010-06-11T07:31:08.629+01:002010-06-11T07:31:08.629+01:00Hi Zamri. The section is looking much clearer... s...Hi Zamri. The section is looking much clearer... some suggestions:<br />• The inhabitation needs to be more descriptive of the effects you desribe- exposure/ perception (ground floor starts to work though!)<br />• Walkers Court elevation needs to be modelled- the perspective is wrong at present- also we need to see glimpses beyond (just blocks)<br />• The flank wall to the left is not straight<br /><br />Keep going! Best JJonathan Daweshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13887093576523816219noreply@blogger.com