Saturday, 5 June 2010

Daytime facade

1 comment:

Jonathan Dawes said...

Hi Kit- this is looking really good! Light and skin are very convincing! Some small things that I think you could try and clear up:

• Ground: take away the step on the pavement so that the building merges with the landscape
• Crop high level behind the building- you are demolishing this wall aren't you?
• Inhabitation: Have figures moving past, into the shop and also maybe cropped by the frame of the image in the foreground
• The big glazed window and curved mullions at ground floor- not sure about this- maybe revert to solid in the obvious areas- which works better?
Thanks for posting- Best J

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