



starting of study part two-relationship out and in to la foret and its self-program(comparing with Gyre):

a more detailed access together with where different groups of people acting differently in and our la foret will be provided. and i will compare it with Gyre. thus, there will be a separately photo gallery to give real images.


3 comments:
Hi Ruo- Thanks for posting. I think the diagram above could be an interesting study. I think the main focus of the drawing should be the grey areas and the appropriation of floors- which is currently absent from the drawing. Your observations should also be more accurately represented in the drawings- is there such a clear segregation of types of store on each floor or is it less obvious? Try to also be speculative about how to include circulation paths- can they tell a story instead of just defining circulation? Keep going with it! Best- Jonathan
Hi, Rue!
It's a good starting point, hoever it's not very clear at the moment. As you said, maybe some street elevations / sections will reveals different space quality/scale in each routes.
I think you need to add more information in your la foret circulation diagram. What are the difference in between two entrances?(i.e. topography, scale of the streets, one is used by specific user groups and how they occupy the space? etc...) Maybe a section will be a good idea!
Keep going!
Hi Ruhong I just wanted to add a few remarks on your Tokyo work.
The urban analyses lacks evidence and precision; The different user groups do make sense in some way but you have not made clear what the characteristics of thhese groups are and what their relevance is for your study (like the local residents).
you needs simple images/words that explain the groups directly; the hand-drawings are too generic.
The shopping guide is clearly made for a certain group if you have found others it can be a handy tool to get an idea of the area the different user groups are supposed to engage with ... however this one does not match your zones
the axo needs more context.
How is the public space organized (does it end at the front door?) And how is it organized internally
nd annotation of spatial quality and type of connections (stairways directly into stores at the front.
Best Dagobert
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