Thursday, 11 March 2010

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Architectural said...

Royce- the scope of the project is now clearer in the text but is not yet communicated in the drawings. Perspective sequences are interesting but need follow through into the various spaces of the project- describing spatial and organisational hierarchies (what is concealed/ revealed and when?)
•Try to avoid arrows to describe circulation- this is too obvious and a little repetitive.
•Are you making diagrams or drawings? If diagrams be clearer, bolder, more strategic- what connects, what direction, which void? If drawings- you must include much more detail- also be precise about the criteria- profiles, reveals, cavities, pockets, grain of material etc. None of this is currently shown or even alluded to.....

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