Ruhong, Overall I see you have clarified your work leaner and clearer. The text needs improvement; all your writings need to be interpreted to give them meaning. I guess you know what you mean with your writing, but you need to describe clearer what you have observed, concluded, what your ambition is and what you are going to do. Keep it simple so I can understand too. D
Camouflage is the blog for Intermediate Unit 6 at the Architectural Association School of Architecture, taught by Jonathan Dawes, Dagobert Bergmans and Fumiko Kato
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Ruhong, Overall I see you have clarified your work leaner and clearer. The text needs improvement; all your writings need to be interpreted to give them meaning. I guess you know what you mean with your writing, but you need to describe clearer what you have observed, concluded, what your ambition is and what you are going to do. Keep it simple so I can understand too. D
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